People say conversation is an art. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
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Definately I agree with that. Conversation is like writing a poem. A poem can give to enough motivation or positive thinking to someone. But also a poem can give to negative thinking or it can hurt someone\'s heart. So when we talk to someone, you should think what you are talking about and how it\'s going to affect to the person who is listening to you. I think the most important thing in conversation is before you say something, you should think. As a result of this, the conversation can be an art.
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Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
It\'s really good reading your composition every day. You never fail to practice your English skills through writing. Just be careful with your punctuation marks and the use of the articles \"a\", \"an\", \"the\". However, you did a great job!^_^
Definately I agree with that.
>>>Definitely, I agree with that.
Conversation is like writing a poem.
>>>A conversation is like writing a poem.
A poem can give to enough motivation or positive thinking to someone.
>>>A poem can give enough motivation or positive thinking to someone.
But also a poem can give to negative thinking or it can hurt someone\'s heart.
>>>But also a poem can give negative thinking or it can hurt someone\'s heart.
So when we talk to someone, you should think what you are talking about and how it\'s going to affect to the person who is listening to you.
>>>So when we talk to someone, we should think what we are talking about and how it\'s going to affect the person who is listening to you.
I think the most important thing in conversation is before you say something, you should think.
>>>I think the most important thing in a conversation is before you say something, you should think first.
As a result of this, the conversation can be an art.
>>> As a result of this, a conversation can be an art.
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