People should discern what is coming their way.
학생이 쓴 원문
I can do anything what I want.
I think the sky is a bit groomy.
Although the new year is begin, nothing has happened.
I have been to the relative\'s home.
The way that I have for going relative\'s home was not good.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Great job in doing your homework and sharing your activities. ^_^
I can do anything what I want.
>>>I can do anything that I want.
I think the sky is a bit groomy.
>>>I think the sky is a bit gloomy.
Although the new year is begin, nothing has happened.
>>>Although the new year has begun, nothing has happened yet.
I have been to the relative\'s home.
>>>I have been to my relative\'s home.
The way that I have for going relative\'s home was not good.
>>>The way that I have in going to my relative\'s home was not good.
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