People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.
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Dear [이름],
A WONDERFUL Wednesday to you! ^.^
I totally agree with you.
We shouldn\'t limit ourselves even in reading.
We should look for more knowledge.
That\'s all for now! ^^
See you soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: Thanks for making a good composition! ^.^
People read books for hobbies, gaining knowledge and anticipating the life in the future.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t agree that people should read books about real events, real people and established fact.
>> I don\'t agree that people should only read books about real events, real people and established facts.
There are various fields that people have to know.
>> CORRECT!
Reading books help us to improve our quality of life.
>> CORRECT!
First of all, reading books with real events and real people or non-fiction books obviously increases our knowledge and can know the life history of great persons.
>> First of all. reading books with real events and real people or non-fiction books obviously increases our knowledge and can know the life and history of great persons and places.
But, reading fiction are equally important.
>> However, reading fiction is equally important.
There are love story, science, history fiction and other stories.
>> There are love stories, Science, History fictions and other stories.
Novels make reader imagine to visualize the character and places in their mind.
>> Novels make readers imagine or visualize the characters and places in their minds.
I think all kind of books are helpful to improve people\'s concentration, vocabulary skills, their self-confidence and train their mind to think positively .
>> I think all kinds of books are helpful in improving people\'s concentration, vocabulary skills, self-confidence and training their minds to think positively.
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