People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.

2017-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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People read books for hobbies, gaining knowledge and anticipating the life in the future. I don't agree that people should read books about real events, real people and established fact. There are various fields that people have to know. Reading books help us to improve our quality of life. First of all, reading books with real events and real people or non-fiction books obviously increases our knowledge and can know the life history of great persons. But, reading fiction are equally important. There are love story, science, history fiction and other stories. Novels make reader imagine to visualize the character and places in their mind. I think all kind of books are helpful to improve people's concentration, vocabulary skills, their self-confidence and train their mind to think positively .

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],

A WONDERFUL Wednesday to you! ^.^

I totally agree with you.

We shouldn\'t limit ourselves even in reading.

We should look for more knowledge.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you soon! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~


P.S.: Thanks for making a good composition! ^.^

People read books for hobbies, gaining knowledge and anticipating the life in the future.

>> CORRECT!

I don\'t agree that people should read books about real events, real people and established fact.

>> I don\'t agree that people should only read books about real events, real people and established facts.

There are various fields that people have to know.

>> CORRECT!

Reading books help us to improve our quality of life.

>> CORRECT!

First of all, reading books with real events and real people or non-fiction books obviously increases our knowledge and can know the life history of great persons.

>> First of all. reading books with real events and real people or non-fiction books obviously increases our knowledge and can know the life and history of great persons and places.

But, reading fiction are equally important.

>> However, reading fiction is equally important.

There are love story, science, history fiction and other stories.

>> There are love stories, Science, History fictions and other stories.

Novels make reader imagine to visualize the character and places in their mind.

>> Novels make readers imagine or visualize the characters and places in their minds.

I think all kind of books are helpful to improve people\'s concentration, vocabulary skills, their self-confidence and train their mind to think positively .

>> I think all kinds of books are helpful in improving people\'s concentration, vocabulary skills, self-confidence and training their minds to think positively.

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