People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Do you agree?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wonder how many people are working for what they like. Most people work for a living even if they don’t enjoy it. It is true when I look at my daughter. Not only my daughter, but almost all of the students don’t like studying, but they have to do it. They don’t have many choices in studying what they like. School curriculum is fixed and doesn’t give a student much flexibility. My daughter often asks me for what she has to study even though she doesn’t like it. My answer to her is that there is a time when we have to do, although we don’t enjoy it. Life is full of the things that we have to embrace regardless of whether we like it or not. In order to be successful, we have to be patient and endure pain. Growth requires pain that we have to overcome. Think about a bird. They have to pick and shatter the shell to be born. It could be painful, but it is the process they have to go through. The same concept allies to our life as well. No pain, no gain.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Sir [이름]. ^^ Thank you so much for sending this in today.
I suddenly remember the time that I studied my major because of my parents.
I do understand how young kids feel about this.
However, they will realize in the future that it is also for their own good.
Have a great day. See you.
Teacher Nina
I wonder how many people are working for what they like.
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Most people work for a living even if they don’t enjoy it.
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It is true when I look at my daughter.
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Not only my daughter, but almost all of the students don’t like studying, but they have to do it.
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They don’t have many choices in studying what they like.
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School curriculum is fixed and doesn’t give a student much flexibility.
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My daughter often asks me for what she has to study even though she doesn’t like it.
>> correct
My answer to her is that there is a time when we have to do, although we don’t enjoy it.
>> correct
Life is full of the things that we have to embrace regardless of whether we like it or not.
>> correct
In order to be successful, we have to be patient and endure pain.
>> correct
Growth requires pain that we have to overcome.
>> correct
Think about a bird.
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They have to pick and shatter the shell to be born.
>> correct
It could be painful, but it is the process they have to go through.
>> correct
The same concept allies to our life as well.
>> correct
No pain, no gain.
>> correct
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