People that seem so glorious are all show. underneath they are like everyone else.

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I don\'t agree with the statement people that seem so glorious are all show.

>> correct!

It is because people are truly trying to live in really great lives.
>> It is because people are trying to live really great lives.
There are many people who do one\'s best in various parts.

>> correct!
 For example, sports heroes try to win medals in games.

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 They practice everyday, overcome hard training, and finally win prizes in big international leagues.

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I feel sports players are great because of their efforts to compete in the games. 
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Also, I have heard a warm-heart news about anonymous donors.

>> Also, I have heard about heart warming news about anonymous donors.

OR>> I\'m not sure about this but are you talking about the organization Warm Heart International?

 They donate a lot of money for poor families.

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It\'s too hard to share something with others, but they practice it.

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I think that they are living in glorious lives.
>> I think that they are living glorious lives.
For these examples, some people live in respectful lives, and they deserve established by others.

>> These are examples of people who are living respectable lives and they deserved to be respected/emulated by others.

Therefore People that seem so glorious are not all show, and they are surely living in glorious lives.

>> correct!