People who has many pets

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Almost everyone want to have a pet such as a dog or a cat.

>>Almost everyone wants to have a pet such as a dog or a cat.

Also, they think sometimes it will be happy to raise many animals for their pets.

>>Also, they sometimes think it is happier to raise many animals as their pets.

However, is it really for owner to raise many animals?

>>However, is it really good for owners to raise many animals?

I think yes because many animal are friendly.

>>I think yes because many animals are friendly.

When we back to the house from the work, they will welcome us as well as we won\'t be lonely.

>>When we go back to our houses from work, they will welcome us, so we won\'t be lonely.

At the same time, I think no because If many animals are in my house, I think that I couldn\'t focus on each animals.

>>In contrast, I think no because if many animals are in my house, I think I couldn\'t focus on taking care of each animal.

In the other word, It can be happen that I can\'t take care them well.

>>In other words, I can\'t raise them well.

As a result, If I have many pets, It is bigger that I can\'t do well on them than that they give me happiness.

>>As a result, if I have many pets, I can\'t take care of them more than all as well as they can\'t also give me happiness.

So, I think it\'s better to raise one or two pets.

>>So I think it\'s better to raise only one or two pets.