Pepero day
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you know Pepero day?November of 11th is Pepero day.
Pepero is a very tasty and famemous biscuit in Korea.
It looks like a long stick.November of 11th has four stick and thats the reason why we have Pepero day.Pepero is covered with chocolate.We can give them to your teacher,friends,girl friend or boy friend.There is many different types of Pepero like the original pepero,almond pepero,milk chocolate pepero,super skinny pepero,giant pepero or gold and silver pepero.
I like almond pepero.I love Pepero day because I can eat lots and lot of Pepero!!!
Luckily I have lots of almond pepero at home which means I can eat lots of almond pepero. I think my mom likes almond pepero like me.
I want to give Pepero to my teacher and my best,best friend.
I think Pepero day is a very nice day for me.....I don't like milkchocolate pepero because I don't like milk chocolate very much but I love milk!!!!
I think my brother likes the original pepero which is just covered with just chocolate.Bye,bye !!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Emma!
HAPPY PEPERO DAY!^_-
It\'s Wednesday!
I\'m breathing.
I\'m healthy.
I\'m truly blessed.
I\'m grateful for this day! (Daily Dose)
Glad to Know that you like Pepero Day. It hasn\'t been long since you transferred to Korea from England but knowing that you\'re enjoying is relieving.
You like eating almod pepero but don\'t eat too much or your teeth will suffer.^_^
Make sure to brush your teeth after eating sweets.
You can give some of your peperos to your friends or better yet, you can eat those together.
Thank you dear for this composition.
I\'ll see you in class then.
~Teacher Mayleen~
Do you know Pepero day?
>> Are you aware of the Pepero Day?
November of 11th is Pepero day.
>> November 11 is Pepero Day.
OR: Pepero Day is on the 11th of November.
Pepero is a very tasty and famemous biscuit in Korea.
>> Pepero is a very tasty and famous biscuit in Korea.
It looks like a long stick.
>> CORRECT
OR: It\'s shape is long like a stick.
November of 11th has four stick and thats the reason why we have Pepero day.
>> The date November 11 (11-11) resembles 4 sticks that\'s why Pepero Day is held on this day.
Pepero is covered with chocolate.
>> The pepero is covered with chocolate.
We can give them to your teacher,friends,girl friend or boy friend.
>> We can give them to our teachers and friends. Some give it to their girlfriends or boyfriends.
There is many different types of Pepero like the original pepero,almond pepero,milk chocolate pepero,super skinny pepero,giant pepero or gold and silver pepero.
>> There are many types of pepero like the original, almond, milk chocolate, super skinny, giant, gold, and silver.
I like almond pepero.
>> I like almod pepero the most.
I love Pepero day because I can eat lots and lot of Pepero!!!
>> I love Pepero Day because I can receive lots and lots of peperos.
Luckily I have lots of almond pepero at home which means I can eat lots of almond pepero.
>> Luckily, I have lots of almond pepero at which means I have lots of almond pepero to eat.
I think my mom likes almond pepero like me.
>> I think my mom likes almond pepero too.
I want to give Pepero to my teacher and my best,best friend.
>> I want to give pepero to my teacher and bestfriend.
I think Pepero day is a very nice day for me.....
>> For me, Pepero Day is a nice day.
I don\'t like milkchocolate pepero because I don\'t like milk chocolate very much but I love milk!!!!
>> I don\'t like milk chocolate pepero because I don\'t like milk chocolate flavor that much but I love milk.
I think my brother likes the original pepero which is just covered with just chocolate.Bye,bye !!!!
>> I think my brother likes the original pepero which is covered with just chocolate. Bye!bye!
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