Peppa pig

2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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We have a test at school in English class.English teacher is make our class see Peppa pig who don't have a test right now. Peppa pig is a Youtube animated film. It has a useful expression. Peppa pig's brother is very cool.I like Peppa pig because it is not hard and not easy.It is my level animated film.

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Hi [이름]!   A wonderful evening to you!^^ Thank you so much for taking a time to do your homework.^^ I really appreciate it. I hope to hear more of your day to day experiences.^^ So, see you later then during our class!^^   ~~ Teacher Kris   We have a test at school in English class. >> We had a test at school in our English class. English teacher is make our class see Peppa pig who don\'t have a test right now. >> Our English teacher asked us to watch Peppa pig after our test. OR: >> After our test, our English teacher told us to watch the Peppa pig. Peppa pig is a Youtube animated film. >> Peppa pig is a Youtube animated character. It has a useful expression. YOU MEAN TO SAY: >> It has a useful lesson or moral. Peppa pig\'s brother is very cool. >>Correct OR: >> The brother of Peppa pig is very cool. I like Peppa pig because it is not hard and not easy. >> I like the movie Peppa pig bacause I can understand it. It is my level animated film. >> It is my favorite animated film.

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