Peppa pig
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We have a test at school in English class.English teacher is make our class see Peppa pig who don't have a test right now. Peppa pig is a Youtube animated film. It has a useful expression. Peppa pig's brother is very cool.I like Peppa pig because it is not hard and not easy.It is my level animated film.
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Hi [이름]!
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~~ Teacher Kris
We have a test at school in English class.
>> We had a test at school in our English class.
English teacher is make our class see Peppa pig who don\'t have a test right now.
>> Our English teacher asked us to watch Peppa pig after our test.
OR:
>> After our test, our English teacher told us to watch the Peppa pig.
Peppa pig is a Youtube animated film.
>> Peppa pig is a Youtube animated character.
It has a useful expression.
YOU MEAN TO SAY: >> It has a useful lesson or moral.
Peppa pig\'s brother is very cool.
>>Correct
OR:
>> The brother of Peppa pig is very cool.
I like Peppa pig because it is not hard and not easy.
>> I like the movie Peppa pig bacause I can understand it.
It is my level animated film.
>> It is my favorite animated film.
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