Perception on Western countries.

2020-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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There are not many countries that seem to have perfectly reasonable and flawless measures to handle the COVID-19, whereas a few nations such as South Korea, Hong Kong and Germany have dealt with the pandemic relatively well. However, when it comes to Western countries, the situation looks even worse given their statistics and social turmoils regarding the virus, which offers a stark comparison to the region\'s conventional reputation as a global leader. The most noticeable example has definitely been illustrated by the United States whose president has kept proving how incompetent and self-serving he is since the very beginning of the outbreak. He doesn\'t seem to be interested in introducing responsible measures that is likely to halt the further spread of the virus, instead, he has obsessed with playing politics for the sake of his popularity and re-election mainly by blaming on his political enemies. He manifests how inconsiderate and irresponsible one can possibly be during a crisis.

강사 첨삭

Hi Drexel! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. I really appreciate your efforts! ^ ^
Good job! No contention with your statements because I definitely agree! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

There are not many countries that seem to have perfectly reasonable and flawless measures to handle the COVID-19, whereas a few nations such as South Korea, Hong Kong and Germany have dealt with the pandemic relatively well. 
>>CORRECT (..in handling the COVID-19..)
However, when it comes to Western countries, the situation looks even worse given their statistics and social turmoils regarding the virus, which offers a stark comparison to the region\'s conventional reputation as a global leader. 
>>CORRECT
The most noticeable example has definitely been illustrated by the United States whose president has kept proving how incompetent and self-serving he is since the very beginning of the outbreak. 
>>CORRECT
He doesn\'t seem to be interested in introducing responsible measures that is likely to halt the further spread of the virus, instead, he has obsessed with playing politics for the sake of his popularity and re-election mainly by blaming on his political enemies. 
>>CORRECT (or..by putting the blame on his political enemies/rivals.)
He manifests how inconsiderate and irresponsible one can possibly be during a crisis.
>>CORRECT

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