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I slept four or five hours a day and in final test day, I bleeded at the nose. I did one’s best for my target. Finally, I took the final exam and I got an average of 10.1. I might have longed for it for a long time so it came true. Then, I bought my puppy. Her sort is Maltese which I named Mi-so. This day is my best day. After that day, I get better in my mind, and some kinds of allergic for a dog not happen. Mi-so always make my family smile.

Most of your sentences are grammatically correct. Keep it up! ^^ I slept four or five hours a day and in final test day, I bleeded at the nose. >> I only slept for four or five hours a day and on the final test day, I had nose bleeding. I did one’s best for my target. >> I did my best to achieve my goal. Finally, I took the final exam and I got an average of 10.1. >>Correct.  I might have longed for it for a long time so it came true. >>Correct. Then, I bought my puppy. >>Correct. Her sort is Maltese which I named Mi-so. >>Her breed is Maltese and I named her Mi-so. This day is my best day. >>This is one of the best days of my life. After that day, I get better in my mind, and some kinds of allergic for a dog not happen. >>After that, I got mentally sound and the dog allergies didn’t occur. Mi-so always make my family smile. >>Correct.