Perhaps you only need to buy three things.
학생이 쓴 원문
Perhaps you only need to buy three thing. If I go shopping, I think I will buy suncream first. Because suncream is very white, it sometimes protect my face, and also helps to block UV rays so that the face is not darkened. And then, maybe I buy a hat. A hat is a must-have item because it is very good to use when you don\'t have hat or sunscreen. If I have a time, I think I will buy a pretty string or pin. Summer can be very windy, so you may need strings or pins.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Happy Saturday Maria!
I think that you have everything you need to be summer ready! All of these minus COVID 19 and you are all set to go to the beach. I hope my premonition comes true. So in case you go to the beach and swim, you are all set.
Thanks for sending me this writing. See you next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> Perhaps you only need to buy three things.
If I go shopping, I think I will buy suncream first.
>> Correct!
Or: sun cream/ sunscreen
Because suncream is very white, it sometimes protect my face, and also helps to block UV rays so that the face is not darkened.
>> Because the sun cream is very white, it sometimes protects my face and also helps block UV rays so that the face is not going to be dark.
And then, maybe I buy a hat.
>> And then, maybe I will buy a hat.
A hat is a must-have item because it is very good to use when you don\'t have hat or sunscreen.
>> Correct!
If I have a time, I think I will buy a pretty string or pin.
>> Correct!
Summer can be very windy, so you may need strings or pins.
>> Correct!
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