perks
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It might be very good perks that the company provide free meal and free accommodation to employee who need it.
But those welfare can be misused to stay employees in the company for a long time.
I think better to eat together family than the company provide free meal for husband after work
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Agreed to that! Regardless of whether the company provides meals for employees. Husbands should still consider going home and having dinner with their family.
Aki~
It might be very good perks that the company provide free meal and free accommodation to employee who need it.
>>> It might be very good perks that the company provides free meals and free accommodation to employees who need it.
But those welfare can be misused to stay employees in the company for a long time.
>>> But that welfare can be misused to keep employees in the company for a long time.
I think better to eat together family than the company provide free meal for husband after work.
>>> I think better to eat together family than the company provides a free meal for the husband after work.
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