perp for interview

2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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weakness in job experience/ why do you think you are suit for this positions? Usually Im in charge of recruiting of contractor but I have background and understanding in healthcare industry through many kick-off meeting with hiring manager. And also people who were a junior level became a specialist and they are working as a senior level in the similar industry. And I think I’m a good judge of character and I believe I can find out right person and well match with various job.

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Usually Im in charge of recruiting of contractor but I have background and understanding in healthcare industry through many kick-off meeting with hiring manager.

>> I\'m usually in charge of recruiting contractors. But, I have a background and understandings of the healthcare industry through a lot of kick-off meetings with the hiring manager.


And also people who were a junior level became a specialist and they are working as a senior level in the similar industry.

>> I\'ve experienced seeing Junior level employees becoming specialists and they are now working as a senior level employee in the similar industry.

And I think I’m a good judge of character and I believe I can find out right person and well match with various job.

>> And I think that I\'m a good judge of character and I believe that I can find out the right person that is well matched with the various job position.



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So far so good ^^ you are honest and this is a good answer for the question :D

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