Personality

2021-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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1. Are you more introverted or more extraverted? I am an introverted person. I like hang out with people and getting to know each other. But after meeting people, I need my own time to sort things out in my head. And I enjoy me time. 2. Do you think you have an unusual personality? Why? I agree with this question a little bit. Often I choose something in different way from others. I think I have my own way and persistence. But I think countless peole who are living on earth now are have indiviual particularity as well. So I don\'t think I am very unusual. And this would be why the world is full of fun and oddities?! 3. If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be? I am a flexible and spontaneous person who can change my plan according to circumstances. I just go with the flow. But It\'s my impression that planners are more likely high achievers than spntaneous people. And I admire them for fulfilling what they scheduled. So I want to emulate them. Thanks♡

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yu [이름]! ^_^
It\'s nice to hear from you again. How are you doing these days?
I hope you\'re healthy and doing great. Thank you for taking the time to practice your writing skills. I loved reading everything that you wrote here.

I\'m an introvert too and I enjoy the company of my plants and pets more than the company of people.
Anyhow, I\'m hoping to talk to you again next time. Take care and have a wonderful evening.
~Teacher Charry

1. Are you more introverted or more extroverted?

I am an introverted person.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am an introvert by nature.

I like hang out with people and getting to know each other.

>> I like hanging out and getting to know them.

But after meeting people, I need my own time to sort things out in my head.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But after mingling with other people, I need some time to process things in my head.

And I enjoy me time.

>> INFORMAL: I also enjoy my \"me\" time.
>> FORMAL: I also enjoy my personal time.

2. Do you think you have an unusual personality? Why?

I agree with this question a little bit.

>> I agree with this question a little.

OR >> I agree with this question a bit.

Often I choose something in different way from others.

>> I often choose something different from others.

OR >> I often choose unique things.

I think I have my own way and persistence.

>> I think I have my own way and is persistent about it.

But I think countless peole who are living on earth now are have indiviual particularity as well.

>> But I think countless people who are living on earth now have their individuality as well.

So I don\'t think I am very unusual.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I think I\'m not very unusual.

And this would be why the world is full of fun and oddities?!

>> This would be why the world is full of fun and oddities!

3. If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?

I am a flexible and spontaneous person who can change my plan according to circumstances.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am a flexible and spontaneous person, and can change my plan according to situation at hand.

I just go with the flow.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I don\'t rigidly follow my plans.

But It\'s my impression that planners are more likely high achievers than spntaneous people.

>> But it\'s my impression that planners are more likely to be high achievers than spontaneous people.

And I admire them for fulfilling what they scheduled.

>> I admire them for fulfilling what they have to do.

OR >> I admire them for sticking to their schedule.

So I want to emulate them.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, I want to be like them.

Thanks♡

>> Thanks. ♡

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