Personnal homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello,
I would like to ask to review my english email as below.
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I’ve forwarded your suggestion to our director.
Now, we are checking from many various artists for the conditions and possibilities they require when they do music business with us.
At the same time, we are currently continuing to discuss this issue with K-drama directors.
Therefore, it will take a long time to get an internal review.
If the song is selected by the director, we will send you the details of the contract later.
강사 첨삭
Hello Charlotte! :)
Now, we are checking from many various artists for the conditions and possibilities they require when they do music business with us.
At the same time, we are currently continuing to discuss this issue with K-drama directors.
Therefore, it will take a long time to get an internal review.
If the song is selected by the director, we will send you the details of the contract later.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful night. :)
~ T. Tricia
I’ve forwarded your suggestion to our director.
>> CORRECT!
Now, we are checking from many various artists for the conditions and possibilities they require when they do music business with us.
>> CORRECT!
At the same time, we are currently continuing to discuss this issue with K-drama directors.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, it will take a long time to get an internal review.
>> CORRECT!
If the song is selected by the director, we will send you the details of the contract later.
>> CORRECT!
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