Perspiration is great.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good morning!
Because of my internet connection, we couldn't talk through SKYPE.
I already found the cause why I couldn't connect the internet, so I will see you on the webcam tomorrow.
Today is my first class this month, so my English speaking skill seemed to regress.
I felt once more that I must not stop studying foreign language.
Since I already finished my personal priority, I can concentrate on studying English.
That is all for today, and see you tomorrow!
*Essay
I agree with his famous word totally.
I think genius is a kind of mean to help someone succeed.
I can't deny genius is an important factor to reach success faster, but if we just trust our geniuses and don't perspire, we won't achieve anything.
In other words, we will fail if we are vain.
Perspiration is great, and it is not easy for people to keep it on for a long period.
We can sometimes face difficulties on the way to reach success, but people who already know about the preciousness of perspiration won't give up easily.
Therefore, we should not blame ourselves for not being clever, but we should realize how precious our perspiration is.
강사 첨삭
Hi once again, [이름]!^^
Thank you for informing me about our class tomorrow!~
I would be very happy in to finally see you!^^
Regarding your essay, thank you for giving me a wonderful composition.
I am looking forward to seeing the next homework that you will be submitting.
Take care!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear [Name],
>> Correct
Good morning!
>> CorrectBecause of my internet connection, we couldn\'t talk through SKYPE.
>> Correct.I already found the cause why I couldn\'t connect the internet, so I will see you on the webcam tomorrow.
>> I already found the cause why I couldn\'t connect to the internet, so I will see you via webcam tomorrow.Today is my first class this month, so my English speaking skill seemed to regress.
>> CorrectI felt once more that I must not stop studying foreign language.
>>I felt that I must not stop studying a foreign language once more. Since I already finished my personal priority, I can concentrate on studying English.
>> CorrectThat is all for today, and see you tomorrow!
>> Correct*Essay I agree with his famous word totally.
>>I totally agree with his famous word.I think genius is a kind of mean to help someone succeed.
>> I think genius is a kind of meaning to help someone succeed.
or>> I think being genius is a way to help someone succeed.I can\'t deny genius is an important factor to reach success faster, but if we just trust our geniuses and don\'t perspire, we won\'t achieve anything.
>> I can\'t deny that being a genius is an important factor to reach success faster but if we trust it and don\'t perspire, we won\'t achieve anything.In other words, we will fail if we are vain.
>> CorrectPerspiration is great, and it is not easy for people to keep it on for a long period.
>> CorrectWe can sometimes face difficulties on the way to reach success, but people who already know about the preciousness of perspiration won\'t give up easily.
>> CorrectTherefore, we should not blame ourselves for not being clever, but we should realize how precious our perspiration is.
>>Correct
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