persuade a client or coworker to go in a different direction.

2023-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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Q. Tell me about a time when you had to persuade a client or coworker to go in a different direction. A. My job is to help student adapt well to school life. So I have to provide customized service for student who have difficult problems in school. In that process, there are different times when the client or coworker idea and my idea. That case, I usually offered my opinion based my experience and I persuaded them. Many person have different experience. So they have many opinios, too. So I think it is important to agree in a reasonable way.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Angela,
Thank you for writing your composition here, I appreciate it. Its contents are well said. I guess you really know your duty as a counselor. And for me, it is one of the most difficult jobs as some situations can affect our emotions. I hope you always get clarity and positivity to think right and provide better guidance. 
-Chammy
My job is to help student adapt well to school life.
>>My job is to help students adapt well to school life.
So I have to provide customized service for student who have difficult problems in school.
>>So I have to provide customized service for students who have difficult problems in school.
In that process, there are different times when the client or coworker idea and my idea.
>>In that process, there are times that my idea is different from my co-worker\'s or client\'s ideas. 
That case, I usually offered my opinion based my experience and I persuaded them.
>> In that case, I usually offer my opinion based on my experience and I persuade them.
Many person have different experience.
>>Many people have different experiences.
So they have many opinios, too.
>>So they have many opinions, too.
So I think it is important to agree in a reasonable way.
>>So I think it is important to agree reasonably.

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