Persuading people scenario
학생이 쓴 원문
Persuading people scenario
Scenario
Changing on duty schedule
I am thinking of going summer vacation for 1 week. But, there is a night duty on days when I want to go for a vacation. I have to find someone to change it for me. I look up the night duty schedule. Doctor Oneil would be a good candidate. She is not on duty when I am on a vacation. Her duty is after it. I look for her and ask if she can change his night duty day for me.
“Hey doctor Oneil! How’s it going?”
강사 첨삭
Changing on duty schedule
I am thinking of going summer vacation for 1 week.
“Hey doctor Oneil! How’s it going?”
>> Correct.
I am thinking of going summer vacation for 1 week.
>> I am thinking of going on a summer vacation for 1 week.
But, there is a night duty on days when I want to go for a vacation.
>> But, there I have a night duty on the day I want my vacation to be.
I have to find someone to change it for me.
>> I have to find someone to exchange with me.
I look up the night duty schedule.
>> Correct.
Doctor Oneil would be a good candidate.
>> Correct.
She is not on duty when I am on a vacation.
>> Correct.
Her duty is after it.
>> Correct.
I look for her and ask if she can change his night duty day for me.
>> I will look for her and ask if she can exchange his night duty for me.
“Hey doctor Oneil! How’s it going?”
>> Correct.
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