pet
학생이 쓴 원문
It recommend as kind and interesting people
Raising a pet is hard but some one raising a pet pretty good it mines he loves animal and loving animal min to me he is very kind.
Raising pet is very interesting. What animal it does not mind. It seems very interesting to me.
That\'s the reason what rising a pet mines to me
강사 첨삭
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>>> It suggests that you are a kind and interesting person.
Raising a pet is hard but some one raising a pet pretty good it mines he loves animal and loving animal min to me he is very kind.
Raising a pet is hard but some one raising a pet pretty good it mines he loves animal and loving animal min to me he is very kind.
>>> Raising a pet is hard but someone raising a pet pretty well means he loves animals and loving animals to me means he is very kind.
Raising pet is very interesting.
>>> Raising a pet is very interesting.
What animal it does not mind.
>>> It doesn\'t matter what animal it is.
It seems very interesting to me.
>>> correct
That\'s the reason what rising a pet mines to me
That\'s the reason what rising a pet mines to me
>>> That\'s what raising a pet means to me.
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