Pet
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Theme: [ESSAY] Your pet tells your personality. Agree or disagree?
I agree.
Because the personality of a pet depends on how I teach it.
So, when a person look at my pet, he or she can know my personality.
I agree because the personality of a pet depends on how I teach it!
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Theme: [ESSAY] Your pet tells your personality. Agree or disagree?
I agree.
Because the personality of a pet depends on how I teach it.
>> I agree because the personality of a pet depends on how I teach it.
So, when a person look at my pet, he or she can know my personality.
>> So, when a person looks at my pet, he or she can guess or know my personality.
I agree because the personality of a pet depends on how I teach it!
>> Therefore, I completely agree with this statement because my pet\'s personality is determined by how I raise it.
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