Pets

2015-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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There are many different animal of pets. There are pet animals like dogs,puppies,cats,kittens,rabbits,hamster,gold fish,crab and birds.I would love to have one of them but mom says no.She says it because they poo and we have to clean them up.Of course I know all of that and of course it'll be a lot of work but pets are so adorable.My favourite pet is puppy and a baby rabbit. I don't think my mom likes any of them and she hates snake.I don't like snake as well but I don't see why my mom doesn't like pet. Of course I will clean up they're poos and everything just if my mom says 'yes'!!! Do you have a pet in your house,Teacher Mayleen?

강사 첨삭

Hi there EMMA! SMILE! It\'s FRIDAY!^_^   Well, If I remember it right, your brother is allergic to animal furs, am I right? Maybe that is also the reason why your mom doesn\'t like to raise pet animals at home. Well If not then never mind. A pet fish I think is okay. Having an aquarium at home even just the small one won\'t require that much of work. My husband has a pet fish at home, a gold fish. He cleans the aquarium and changes the water 2 to 3 times a month. He feeds it once or twice a day. We also have a puppy at home. It\'s name is Justin Bieber. My daughter was the one who named it.   Thank you dear for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications so kindly check and review, okay?:) I\'ll see you in class. Have a great weekend!^_-   =Teacher Mayleen=     There are many different animal of pets. >> There are many kinds of animal pets. There are pet animals like dogs,puppies,cats,kittens,rabbits,hamster,gold fish,crab and birds. >> There are pet animals like dogs and puppies, cats and kittens, rabbits, hamsters, gold fish, crabs, and birds.   I would love to have one of them but mom says no. >> I would love to have one but my said we can\'t.   She says it because they poo and we have to clean them up. >> She said it\'s because we\'ll have to clean them up including their wastes. Of course I know all of that and of course it\'ll be a lot of work but pets are so adorable. >> Of course I know that. I also know that having a pet requires a lot of work but they\'re just so adorable. My favourite pet is puppy and a baby rabbit. >> My favorite pets are puppies and baby rabbits.I don\'t think my mom likes any of them and she hates snake. >> My mom hates snakes and I think she doesn\'t like to have any pets at home. I don\'t like snake as well but I don\'t see why my mom doesn\'t like pet. >> I don\'t like snakes as well but I don\'t understand why my mom doesn\'t like the other pet animals.Of course I will clean up they\'re poos and everything just if my mom says \'yes\'!!! >> I will clean them up including their waste products if only my mom would say yes.Do you have a pet in your house,Teacher Mayleen? >> Do you have a pet at home, Teacher Mayleen?

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