Pets are.....
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Theme: Are pets only for companionship or also for protection? Why?
Pets are also for protection.
Some people live with pets because they want to give treatment or recuperation.
Some people use pets to talk together.
And get something off of him(or her).
I think pets are both for companionship and protection!
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Hello again, [이름]!
As always, thanks for the prompt submission of your composition. I appreciate it!
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Jean~~
Theme: Are pets only for companionship or also for protection? Why?
Pets are also for protection.
>> correct~~
Some people live with pets because they want to give treatment or recuperation.
>> Some people live with pets because they want to give treatment or help recuperate the animals.
Some people use pets to talk together.
>> Some people use pets as someone they can talk to.
And get something off of him(or her).
>> And someone they can unload their frustrations or burdens to.
I think pets are both for companionship and protection!
>> correct~~
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