Philippine

2010-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I missed you. Why did you absence? In last composition correction, I know thay you came from Manila. So, you are Filipinos. Right? I have been there. That is my first overseas trip. When I was college, I take a chance of going Philippine with support from college. I stayed 3 weeks in University of Regina Carmeli. The University in Malolos city. I went English speaking academy for a month bofore I went Philippine. But that is no big effect. I wish I knew the Tellephone English. I had a hard time in conversation. Mainly I visited of inspection to Hospital. I want to go again Mall of Asia. There is so big that I didn't look around in the mall completely.

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Hello Lindsay! Thank you for your message. I missed you too!   Yes, I am from the Philippines. I lived in Manila before but I moved here to Baguio City last year. Wow. So you뭭e been here before? That뭩 great. How did you like it? I hope you can come visit soon. I love strolling around Mall of Asia too. It뭩 a huge mall so one day is really not enough to tour it. Maybe next time you can devote some time to do that. By the way, I went to Manila this weekend and I arrived just yesterday morning. I was so tired from the long trip so I wasn't able to come to work.  I corrected your sentences here, please check them out and review them. Take care and enjoy your day! CIAO!

= T.Marie =

Philippine

>> Philippines

I missed you.

>> correct

Why did you absence?
>> Why were you absent?
In last composition correction, I know thay you came from Manila.

>> In the last composition correction, I found out that you came from Manila.
So, you are Filipinos. Right?

>> So you are a Filipino, right?
I have been there.

>> correct

That is my first overseas trip.

>> That was my first overseas trip
When I was college, I take a chance of going Philippine with support from college.

>> When I was in University, I took the chance of going to the Philippines with my school뭩 support.
I stayed 3 weeks in University of Regina Carmeli.

>> I stayed for three weeks at the University of Regina Carmeli.
The University in Malolos city.

>> It뭩 a University in Malolos City.
I went English speaking academy for a month bofore I went Philippine.

>> I went to an English Academy for a month before going to the Philippines.
But that is no big effect.

>> But it had no big effect on me.
I wish I knew the Tellephone English.

>> I wish I knew about Phone English back then.
I had a hard time in conversation.

>> correct
Mainly I visited of inspection to Hospital.

>> I mainly visited the inspection of hospitals.
I want to go again Mall of Asia.

>> I want to got to Mall of Asia again.
There is so big that I didn't look around in the mall completely.

>> It was so big that I didn뭪 get to look around it that much.

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