Philippine
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Lindsay! Thank you for your message. I missed you too! Yes, I am from the Philippines. I lived in Manila before but I moved here to Baguio City last year. Wow. So you뭭e been here before? That뭩 great. How did you like it? I hope you can come visit soon. I love strolling around Mall of Asia too. It뭩 a huge mall so one day is really not enough to tour it. Maybe next time you can devote some time to do that. By the way, I went to Manila this weekend and I arrived just yesterday morning. I was so tired from the long trip so I wasn't able to come to work. I corrected your sentences here, please check them out and review them. Take care and enjoy your day! CIAO!
= T.Marie =
Philippine
>> Philippines
I missed you.
>> correct
Why
did you absence?
>> Why were you
absent?
In last composition correction, I know thay you came from Manila.
>>
In the last composition correction, I found out that you came from Manila.
So, you are Filipinos. Right?
>>
So you are a Filipino, right?
I have been there.
>> correct
That is my first overseas trip.
>>
That was my first overseas trip
When I was college, I take a chance of going Philippine with support from
college.
>>
When I was in University, I took the chance of going to the Philippines with my
school뭩 support.
I stayed 3 weeks in University of Regina Carmeli.
>>
I stayed for three weeks at the University of Regina Carmeli.
The University in Malolos city.
>>
It뭩 a University in Malolos City.
I went English speaking academy for a month bofore I went Philippine.
>>
I went to an English Academy for a month before going to the Philippines.
But that is no big effect.
>>
But it had no big effect on me.
I wish I knew the Tellephone English.
>>
I wish I knew about Phone English back then.
I had a hard time in conversation.
>>
correct
Mainly I visited of inspection to Hospital.
>>
I mainly visited the inspection of hospitals.
I want to go again Mall
of Asia.
>>
I want to got to Mall of Asia again.
There is so big that I didn't look around in the mall completely.
>> It was so big that I didn뭪 get to look around it that much.
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