Phone Class
학생이 쓴 원문
To study English, I chose a method using a cell phone. It is very convenient and efficient as wll. Especially I like my tuitor, who is very out-going and careful.
I think we have been studying for about 7 or 8 month and I felt my English is better than before. And now I want to correct my grammatical faults and speak full perfect sentences. So, please help me study in this way...^^
Finally, As for writing if you suggest some keyword or subject, it would be more helpful for me to write.
Thang you,,,see you in the evening !
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [Name],
I am so flattered to know that you have learn something from me. But I think you won\'t achieve what you have now without your own perseverance to learn.Starting today, I will give you some essay question which can develop your skill of reasoning and so on. So have fun and see you later alligator!
T.Sheela
To study English, I chose a method using a cell phone.
>> To study english, I choose the phone class method.
It is very convenient and efficient as wll.
>>It is very convenient and efficient as well. (spealing of well)
Especially I like my tuitor, who is very out-going and careful.
>>Most especially I like my tuitor, who is very out-going and carefull.I think we have been studying for about 7 or 8 month and I felt my English is better than before.
>> Correct!
And now I want to correct my grammatical faults and speak full perfect sentences.
>>Now, I want to correct my grammar mistakes and to speak fluently.
So, please help me study in this way...^^
>> So, please help me study on this.^^Finally, As for writing if you suggest some keyword or subject, it would be more helpful for me to write.
>> Finally, As for writing if you suggest some keyword or subject, it would be more helpful for me to write. Thang you,,,see you in the evening !
>>Thank you! !See you in the evening!
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