Phone connection Error
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good afternoon Klein. It's rain today in korea.
I like a sound a rain.
I'm sorry that i missed your call yesterday because i have joined Important meeting regarding Qurtation for New project.
And.. today i was wait your call but your call did not come.
I think we have problem of phone connection error if do you have called me.
Could you please ask to pweng manager about this problem?
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Rich!
Thanks for the notice.
Honestly, I tried to reach you several times a while ago just like yesterday but all I heard was a short ringing sound then a voice prompt. I don\'t know why but I also used our back-up phone, which we use in case of emergency, but I got the same response.
I already raised this problem to my managers. Thank you so much!
I hope they can give you a call. I\'m terribly sorry Rich.
I thought you\'re just too busy.
If it\'s fine with you, could you reboot your phone? Sometimes, this also happens to me and my friends.
How I hope we won\'t encounter this problem again next week.
I truly apologize for the inconvenience. I even tagged your class absent.
I miss talking to you Rich! We did not talk for two days. I bet you already have many stories to share with me.
You must be working really hard, which is good for your family.
But don\'t forget to take a break once in a while. Never strain yourself beyond your limits.
May you continue to have a great day and have fun this coming weekend!
Stay safe!
_Klein
P.S. I already informed my manager about this problem. I hope can figure out the problem.
Again, thank you for the notice.
Dear [Name],Good afternoon Klein.
>>Correct!
It\'s rain today in korea.
>>It\'s raining today in Korea.
>>It\'s raining today here in Korea.I like a sound a rain.
>>I like the sound of the rain.I\'m sorry that i missed your call yesterday because i have joined Important meeting regarding Qurtation for New project.>>I\'m sorry that I missed your call yesterday because I have joined an important meeting regarding Quotation for New Project.
>>I\'m sorry that I missed your call yesterday because I have joined an important meeting regarding the quotation for our new project.And.. today i was wait your call but your call did not come.
>>And today, I was waiting for your call but your call did not come.
>>And today, I was waiting for your call but it did not come.I think we have problem of phone connection error if do you have called me.
>>I think we have problems with the phone connection if you have called me.
>>I think there\'s a phone connection error if you have called me.Could you please ask to pweng manager about this problem?Thank you.
>>Correct
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