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2025-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I cant choose because I love both of them!!!! I would rather have a french frie house because when it gets hot the chocolate melts. I would raher make others lagh because when my freinds are sad I can make them laugh.

강사 첨삭

Chester,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

-Teacher Ash

I cant choose because I love both of them!!!!

>> I can\'t choose because I love both of them.

I would rather have a french frie house because when it gets hot the chocolate melts.

>> I would rather have French fries than chocolate because when it\'s hot the chocolate will melt.

I would raher make others lagh because when my freinds are sad I can make them laugh.

>> I would rather make others laugh because I want to make my friends laugh when they are sad.

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