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Yes I have taken and also been taken secretly
I like to take a picture of my friends when they do something bad or stupid.
For example, when my friend pee on the street , I videotape him secretly.
and show my friends it later.
Few years ago, my friends took a picture when I took a shower.
It is a all nude picture. and He has kept that picture in his cell phone so far.
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Job well done my dear..:)
T.Cam
Yes I have taken and also been taken secretly
>>Yes I have taken and also been taken pictures secretly.
I like to take a picture of my friends when they do something bad or stupid.
>>correct!
For example, when my friend pee on the street , I videotape him secretly.
>>For example, when my friend pee on the street , I record a video of this secretly.
and show my friends it later.
>.correct
Few years ago, my friends took a picture when I took a shower.
>>Few years ago, my friends took pictures of me when I was taking a shower.
It is a all nude picture. and He has kept that picture in his cell phone so far.
>>It was all nude and he has kept that picture in his cellphone so far.
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