photographs
학생이 쓴 원문
I have owned a digital camera for over 7 years.
Since I first bought it, I took lots of pictures like myself , friends , family and landscape.
Before buying a digital camera, I used a film camera which was uncomfortable compared to the digital one.
I usually take the pictures of landscape.
Whenever I go on a trip , I try to take many pictures of good landscapes.
It helps to remind me of that place long after.
Nowadays I have taken lots of pictures of my nephew.
When I am watching her face , I feel happy.
and think of it as a weapon to fight against me.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름], it was really nice reading about your passion in taking pictures..:)
I do appreciate that you share your ideas and thoughts about that.
Keep up the good work..
T.Cam
I have owned a digital camera for over 7 years.
>>correct
Since I first bought it, I took lots of pictures like myself , friends , family and landscape.
>>correct!
Before buying a digital camera, I used a film camera which was uncomfortable compared to the digital one.
>>correct!
I usually take the pictures of landscape.
>>correct!
>>I usually take pictures of landscapes.
Whenever I go on a trip , I try to take many pictures of good landscapes.
>>correct!
It helps to remind me of that place long after.
>>It helps me reminds of that place for a long period of time.
Nowadays I have taken lots of pictures of my nephew.
>>correct!
When I am watching her face , I feel happy.
>>I feel happy whenever I look at his face.
and think of it as a weapon to fight against me.
>>And I think its one of my weaknesses.
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