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2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I have owned a digital camera for over 7 years. Since I first bought it, I took lots of pictures like myself , friends , family and landscape. Before buying a digital camera, I used a film camera which was uncomfortable compared to the digital one. I usually take the pictures of landscape. Whenever I go on a trip , I try to take many pictures of good landscapes. It helps to remind me of that place long after. Nowadays I have taken lots of pictures of my nephew. When I am watching her face , I feel happy. and think of it as a weapon to fight against me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름], it was really nice reading about your passion in taking pictures..:) I do appreciate that you share your ideas and thoughts about that. Keep up the good work.. T.Cam   I have owned a digital camera for over 7 years. >>correct Since I first bought it, I took lots of pictures like myself , friends , family and landscape. >>correct! Before buying a digital camera, I used a film camera which was uncomfortable compared to the digital one. >>correct! I usually take the pictures of landscape. >>correct! >>I usually take pictures of landscapes. Whenever I go on a trip , I try to take many pictures of good landscapes. >>correct! It helps to remind me of that place long after. >>It helps me reminds of that place for a long period of time. Nowadays I have taken lots of pictures of my nephew. >>correct! When I am watching her face , I feel happy. >>I feel happy whenever I look at his face. and think of it as a weapon to fight against me. >>And I think its one of my weaknesses.

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