Phuket
학생이 쓴 원문
I have no special itinerary
This trip is a kind of reward for my youngest daughter. She has finished her work in another academy. She was praised a lot for the competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy. I wanted her to relax and relieve the stress. So we stayed at a resort with five swimming pools and nice nature. Near our accommodation, there is a long beach and local market. We swam every day and enjoyed Thai food.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Wow! I can imagine how relaxing your vacation must have been. Sometimes, having no itinerary makes a trip better because you can do things spontaneously. It\'s also nice that you treated your daughter as a sign of appreciation as well. I think it made her vacation more memorable!
- T. Caitlyn
I have no special itinerary
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This trip is a kind of reward for my youngest daughter.
This trip is a kind of reward for my youngest daughter.
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She has finished her work in another academy.
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She was praised a lot for the competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy.
>> She was praised a lot for her competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy.
I wanted her to relax and relieve the stress.
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So we stayed at a resort with five swimming pools and nice nature.
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Near our accommodation, there is a long beach and local market.
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We swam every day and enjoyed Thai food.
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