Physical activity!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Physical activity has a positive effect on a person\'s mental and emotional condition. Physical activity makes your heart beat faster. When your heart starts beating fast, blood circulation improves, so you get hot and sweat a lot. This is the process of getting your body healthy. When the body is healthy, the mind must also be healthy. Because they are connected. Physical activity also gives us confidence. Exercise has a good effect on us.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Physical activity has a positive effect on a person\'s mental and emotional condition.
>>> CORRECT!
Physical activity makes your heart beat faster.
>>> CORRECT!
When your heart starts beating fast, blood circulation improves, so you get hot and sweat a lot.
>>> CORRECT!
This is the process of getting your body healthy.
>>> CORRECT!
When the body is healthy, the mind must also be healthy.
>>> CORRECT!
Because they are connected.
>>> CORRECT!
Physical activity also gives us confidence. Exercise has a good effect on us.
>>> CORRECT!
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