Physical forcevto discipline

2013-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Is it acceptable for parents to use physical force to discipline their children? Why or why not? Explain your answer. Recently, There are so many bad teenagers who are addicted to alcohol, cigarette, and any other stuffs. But, How did they become like this? Don't you think the casue of their behavior is from parents? According to the survey of bad teenagers, 70‰of them have their family problems. I strongly think that their parents do not care about what the children do, what the children drink and what the children think. And of course, they don't want to engage in their children fairs. As a result, their children are easily addicted to the unhealthy things. However , what if they force the physical scourage to punish them? They may be good children.

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Recently, There are so many bad teenagers who are addicted to alcohol, cigarette, and any other stuffs.

>>Recently, there have been a lot of teenagers who are addicted to alcohol, cigarette, and other things that are bad for their health.

But, How did they become like this?

>>CORRECT!

>>Anyway, how did they become like this?

>>Anyway, what happened to them?

Don\'t you think the casue of their behavior is from parents?

>>Don\'t you think that the reason behind this has something to do with their parents?

According to the survey of bad teenagers, 70‰of them have their family problems.

>>CORRECT!

I strongly think that their parents do not care about what the children do, what the children drink and what the children think.

>> I strongly believe that their parents do not care about what their children do, what their children drink and what their children think.

And of course, they don\'t want to engage in their children fairs.

>>And that only means that they do not want to engage themselves in their children\'s everyday affairs.

As a result, their children are easily addicted to the unhealthy things.

>>CORRECT!

However , what if they force the physical scourage to punish them?

>>But the problem with that is when they use force to discipline their children.

They may be good children.

>> Correct!

OR >>...not knowing that they are good children.

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