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2011-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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First of all, I think that this picture was taken outdoor. The first, I want to notice in this picture 4 men , maybe talking something serious A man on the left wearing a blue collared shirt and jeans is holding a shelve. A man on the right wearing a green shirt looks want to say something to them. In front of the picture, i can see some item gathering same place evenly. In the background of the picture, There are a lot of trees growing side by side. I can`t see any leaves so i can`t imagine how big is the tree.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Good improvement on your sentences! Good job. I just have a question for you on on of them though. Keep up the good work. I'll catch you later in class. Enjoy the weekend. :D -T.Dominic First of all, I think that this picture was taken outdoor.>> First of all, I think that this picture was taken outdoors. >>The first thing I notice is that this picture was taken outdoors. [or]The first, I want to notice in this picture 4 men , maybe talking something serious>>One thing I observed in this picture are 4 men, who are probably talking about something serious. [or a serious matter]A man on the left wearing a blue collared shirt and jeans is holding a shelve.>>The man on the left wearing a blue collared shirt and jeans is holding a SHOVEL.A man on the right wearing a green shirt looks want to say something to them.>>The man on the right is wearing a green shirt and it looks like he wants to say something to them.In front of the picture, i can see some item gathering same place evenly.>>In middle/foreground of the picture I can see some items gathered in one place/area evenly. [let's talk about this sentence later]In the background of the picture, There are a lot of trees growing side by side.>>At the background of the picture, there are a lot of trees growing right next to each other. I can`t see any leaves so i can`t imagine how big is the tree. >>I can't see any leaves/branches so I can't imagine how big the trees are.

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