Pick one food
학생이 쓴 원문
I will choose kimchi fried rice.
because it is the menu that I can cook with the most confidence.
I like this cooked food , because I love kimchi.
It is also the easy and simple dish to make.
I chose it because it makes it easy to fill a full meal.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia! Well done on completing your homework.
Your original text is understandable,
but some sentences can be refined for clarity and grammar.
Here are the corrections. I hope it helps.
(Note: I made a few changes to your sentence to provide a more polished version.
Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you\'d like further explanations on specific corrections.)
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
>>> CORRECT!
because it is the menu that I can cook with the most confidence.
because it is the menu that I can cook with the most confidence.
>>>because I am most confident in preparing this dish.
I like this cooked food , because I love kimchi.
I like this cooked food , because I love kimchi.
>>> I enjoy this dish because I love kimchi.
It is also the easy and simple dish to make.
It is also the easy and simple dish to make.
>>> It is also an easy and simple dish to make.
I chose it because it makes it easy to fill a full meal.
I chose it because it makes it easy to fill a full meal.
>>> I chose it because it helps create a satisfying full meal.
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