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I think this picture was taken in a Restaurant. The First thing I can see are many people who are standing in line in oder to get some foods. In the middle of the picture, there is a man wearing a white shirts, a blue jeans and holding a bag. There are many pictures discribing the food and menu on the wall. Sevaral foods are displayed in the counter. So i think it is a buffet style of the Restaurant. It makes feel hungry.

Hello [이름], Thanks for sending in this composition. Your writing skills have improved, very good. Just be cautious with the spelling and capitalization of the words that you use. See yah later! Bye. -T. Dominic - I think this picture was taken in a Restaurant.>> I think this picture was taken in a restaurant. [we only capitalize proper nouns]The First thing I can see are many people who are standing in line in oder to get some foods.>> The first thing I notice is that there  are many people who are standing in line in oder to get some food.In the middle of the picture, there is a man wearing a white shirts, ablue jeans and holding a bag.>> In the middle of the picture is a man wearing a white shirt, blue jeans and he is holding a bag.There are many pictures discribing the food and menu on the wall.>> There are many pictures DESCRIBING the food and menu on the wall.Sevaral foods are displayed in the counter.>> Sevaral foods are displayed AT the counter. [we use the preposition AT when we are describing something that is not near us.]So i think it is a buffet style of the Restaurant.>>So I think this is a buffet style of restaurant. It makes feel hungry. >>This picture makes me feel hungry. >>This makes me feel hungry.