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In the picture 4, there are 2 children who are in blue clothes and 2 adults in black suits. It seems that they just step outside of a spaceship. There are birds near a tree. And there is another tree on the top of the hill. The children are excited and running up the hills. The adults are watching the children near them.
However, the scene is remotely possible in real world. When a person goes to space his muscles and bones become weaken, because there is no gravity. If he comes back to Earth, he will waddle as it is hard to walk around with gravity. He will not be able to run on plane fields, not to mention up in hills.
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Hi Max! ^ ^ I\'m not sure if I gave you this homework, but nice thoughts though! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
In the picture 4, there are 2 children who are in blue clothes and 2 adults in black suits.
>>In picture 4, two children are in blue clothes and 2 adults are in black suits.
It seems that they just step outside of a spaceship.
>>It seems that they have just stepped out of a spaceship.
There are birds near a tree.
>>There are birds on a tree.
And there is another tree on the top of the hill.
>>CORRECT
The children are excited and running up the hills.
>>The children are excited and are running up the hills.
The adults are watching the children near them.
>>The adults are watching the children nearby.
However, the scene is remotely possible in real world.
However, the scene is remotely possible in real world.
>>However, the scene is remotely impossible in real world.
When a person goes to space his muscles and bones become weaken, because there is no gravity.
>>When a person goes to space his muscles and bones become weak because there is no gravity.
If he comes back to Earth, he will waddle as it is hard to walk around with gravity.
>>CORRECT
He will not be able to run on plane fields, not to mention up in hills.
>>CORRECT
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