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2022-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I smiled at the pictures of Hong Kong students. They seem innocent and curious. It is natural for young students to judge only by as result of seeing and social media. They don\'t seem to know the negative aspects of Korea. I think they are too young to know Korea objectively.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for taking time to react on the article. I guess that is very common for people who are not familiar with the culture of other countries. 
Have a great day!
Aki~
I smiled at the pictures of Hong Kong students.
>>> CORRECT
They seem innocent and curious.
>>> CORRECT
It is natural for young students to judge only by as result of seeing and social media.
>>>  It is natural for young students to judge only as a result of seeing social media.
They don\'t seem to know the negative aspects of Korea.
>>> CORRECT
I think they are too young to know Korea objectively.
>>> CORRECT


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