Pictures 3
학생이 쓴 원문
There are lots of ways to share my pictures.
The most common way is using internet site like facebook,tweeter or other social networks.
My favorite one is "Cyworld" which is called as korean facebook.
I can upload my pictures to the site and let my friends see that.
then they post comments and I answer them.
It helps me to keep in touch with them.
um. I think that is a silly idea.
I haven't thought about it at all.
Why does taking photoes have to be regulated?
We all have freedom to take any pictures as long as it is not illegal.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for sharing some of your insights about internet.
Well, job well done as usual my dear!
Talk to you later okay?
T.Cam
There are lots of ways to share my pictures.
The most common way is using internet site like facebook,tweeter or other social networks.
>>correct!
My favorite one is "Cyworld" which is called as korean facebook.
>>correct!
I can upload my pictures to the site and let my friends see that.
>>I can upload my pictures on the site and let my friends see them.
then they post comments and I answer them.
>>correct!
It helps me to keep in touch with them.
>>It helps me keep in touch with them.
um. I think that is a silly idea
>>correct!
I haven't thought about it at all.
>>correct!
>>I havent thought of it at all.
Why does taking photoes have to be regulated?
>>Why does taking pictures have to be regulated?
We all have freedom to take any pictures as long as it is not illegal.
>>correct!
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