pilgrimage

My family went to a pilgrimage for my son's first communion. The children who prepare for the first communion need to receive the education for the communion from the church. Children who are third or fourth elementary school student receive the education for the first communion for tree month. My son has been receiving that education and it is almost finished. All students and their parents have decided to go to a pilgrimage as the preparation for the first communion. The shrine we are going to visit is located near my town. It took us for 1 hour by car. The shrine was built and decorated well, There were beautiful church's facilities. The garden in shrine were beautiful. I felt like I were in the garden of Eden. In spite of beautiful scene, This place has contained lot of sad stories of martyrs

My family went to a pilgrimage for my son\'s first communion. >> CORRECT! OR >> My family attended a pilgrimage for my son\'s first communion. The children who prepare for the first communion need to receive the education for the communion from the church. >> CORRECT! OR >> The children preparing to receive their first communion should receive the education for the communion from the church. Children who are third or fourth elementary school student receive the education for the first communion for tree month. >> Children who are third or fourth elementary school students receive the education for their first communion for three months.My son has been receiving that education and it is almost finished. >> CORRECT! OR >> My son has been having that education and it is almost. All students and their parents have decided to go to a pilgrimage as the preparation for the first communion. >> All students and their parents have decided to go to a pilgrimage as a preparation for their first communion.The shrine we are going to visit is located near my town. >> The shrine that we visited is located near my town. It took us for 1 hour by car. >> It took us 1 hour by car to get there. The shrine was built and decorated well, There were beautiful church\'s facilities. >> The shrine was built and decorated well and there were beautiful church facilities. The garden in shrine were beautiful. >> The garden in the shrine was beautiful. I felt like I were in the garden of Eden. >> I felt like I was in the garden of Eden. OR >> It was as if I was walking in the garden of Eden. In spite of beautiful scene, This place has contained lot of sad stories of martyrs >> In spite of the beautiful scene, this place has a lot of sad stories of martyrs.