Pilippines is surrounded with water and islands.
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Pilippines is surrounded with water and many islands.
Maybe there is short farmland in Pilippines.
But Korean farmland is shorter than Pilippines.
We import many harvests but export many industrial products.
For example, it is cellular phone, semiconductor, electronic products.
What kinds of cellular phone do you have?
Is it made by Nokia or Samsung?
What percent of people have cellular phone?
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Hi [이름]!!
As a matter of fact, Philippines has a lot of farmlands and fishing ponds..
The main industry of our country is farming because we have a lot of fertile lands..
We export harvested products to many countries around the world. Each region has their own special crop..^^
In Korea, your main industry is electronics right? ^^
My cellular phone is mad by LG. I used to have Nokia and Samsung..
Here in the Philippines, almost 99% of the people here has cellular phone..
See you in class!
T. Shy
Pilippines is surrounded with water and many islands.>> Philippines is surrounded with water and many islands.
Maybe there is short farmland in Pilippines.>> Maybe there are few farmlands in the Philippines.
But Korean farmland is shorter than Pilippines.>> But Korean farmland is fewer than Philippines.
We import many harvests but export many industrial products.>> We import many harvested products but export many industrial products.For example, it is cellular phone, semiconductor, electronic products.>> For example, cellular phone, semiconductor, electronic products.
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