pimple, pimple, PIMPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi J!!! Oh no, you are again having that same old problem. I don't like cold weather too. It makes our skin dry that moisturuzer sometimes doesn't work. Honestly speaking, just for this one, I don't want to be in your shoes. But cheer up girl, it's soon going to be spring time. Smile now. Have a great Monday!!!
Lei J
Oh no~~~~~~
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I have a lot of pimples. no way~!!!!!
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I told you It is pimple that I hate most in the world.
>>As I told you before, I hate pimples the most in the whole world.
I was under pressure of slipped disk.
>>I was under a lot of pressure because of my slipped disk.
It might bring about pimples on my face.
>>It might be the reason why I have pimples on my face.
uh..I hate it.
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It's getting cold and my feeling is getting worse.
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These days I am wearing my hunter boots since a month ago.
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>>I have bee wearing my hunter boots for a month now.
Sometimes I feel I want to put on kill-heeled but the roads are too slippery to put the high-heeled.
>>Sometimes, I feel that I wanted to use high-heels but the roads are too slippery.
That means I need to wear a casual dress.
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You know my position have a requsite dress code like banning of mini skirts.
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well...there are many inconvenience things in the winter.
>>well there are lots of inconveniences that suffer from during winter.
>>Well there are many inconvenient things that we encounter during winter.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.