pitiful dogs
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I feel sad and angry after watching this video.
This is a kind of animal amusements.
Dogs have four legs so they feel comfortable when they walk on four legs.
If some aliens trained and forced to human to walk on one leg?
There are grotesque and cruel human in the world.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Absolutely, I completely agree. It\'s deeply concerning when animals are pushed beyond their natural capabilities for human entertainment. Some people are just \"sick\" mentally. We hope that there weill be a law that will give limitations to humans n how much should they let their pets d a certain thing.
See you in class!
Aki~
I feel sad and angry after watching this video.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>> After viewing this video, a mix of sadness and anger overwhelms me.
This is a kind of animal amusements.
>>> This is a kind of animal abuse that amuse most people.
Dogs have four legs so they feel comfortable when they walk on four legs.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Dogs naturally have four legs, providing them with comfort and stability while walking.
If some aliens trained and forced to human to walk on one leg?
>>> If some aliens trained and force humans to walk on one leg?
>>> Imagine if extraterrestrials trained and coerced humans into walking on just one leg?
There are grotesque and cruel human in the world.
>>> CORRECT!
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