Pizza sale
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Hi, [이름]!
Wow! That\'s fantastic!
You know that I love pizza too. You just made me hungry. T_T
Anyway, I\'m happy that you ate pizza continuously.
Be careful not to have a stomachache. ^^
Have a great ahead!
_Teacher Dianne
Yesterday and Wednesday, there is a pizza sale.Because some store start to making pizza.
>> There was a pizza sale yesterday and on last Tuesday because some stores started making pizza.
I ate pizza in a row.
>> correct
>> or: I ate pizza in continuously.
Ham pizza was a little tasty and Galbi(a traditional Korean meat) pizza tastes wonderful.
>> Ham pizza was a little tasty and Galbi (a traditional Korean meat) pizza tasted wonderful.
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