Pizza School sweet potato pizza with spaghetti.
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I ate sweet potato pizza with spaghetti for lunch. It was good.
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>> I ate sweet potato pizza and spaghetti for lunch and it was good.
I enjoyed my launch. But it was too full. I ate four pieces of pizza and all of the spaghetti.
>> I enjoyed my lunch but I am too full. I ate four slices of pizza and all of the spaghetti.
Now, I am really thirtsty because pizza was salty.
>> Now, I am really thirsty because the pizza was salty.
The price of the pizza increased 1dollar than last year.
>> The price of the pizza increased for $1 compared last year.
When I was young it was just 5dollars to eat pizza but now its 8dollars to eat.
>> When I was young, it was just $5, now it costs $8 to eat pizza.
It\'s my second times to eat pizza store\'s spaaghetti.
>> It\'s my second time to eat the pizza store\'s spaghetti.
There was a smell of the spaghetti but I enjoyed it.
>> There was a weird smell of the spaghetti but I enjoyed it.
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