Pizza terror

For todays dinner we decide to eat pizza. Therefore, I have to go and collect the pizza.I rode bike to the pizza shop and I parked and locked the bike and went in.I asked the manger that I came here for potatoe pizza. Suddenly the manger told me that we haven't oder the pizza. So I was shocked and rang Mum and she told me that she is going to order. So the manger said to wait about fiftheen minutes. I bought the pizza came home. It was really hard to ride bike with holding a pizza. OH NOOOOOOO! We ate pizza and I think it was more scrumptious because I colleted. It was a very unlucky day!!

Hi there Min! Happy Thursday lad!:)   Pizza is a very tempting food. It could be a treat from your mom so don\'t think that it was an unlucky day. Consider it a new experience for you and now you know that things which you worked hard for are more delicious, more satisfying, more special. Thabk you Min for this composition. You did well. There were just minor revisions. I\'ll see you in class. Have a great evening!(^_^)   ~Teacher Mayleen~   For todays dinner we decide to eat pizza. >> For today\'s dinner we decided to eat pizza.   Therefore, I have to go and collect the pizza. >> Therefore, I had to go and pick up the pizza.   I rode bike to the pizza shop and I parked and locked the bike and went in. >> I rode my bike to the pizza shop. I parked, locked my bike, and went in.   I asked the manger that I came here for potatoe pizza. >> I told the manager that I came to get the potato pizza.   Suddenly the manger told me that we haven\'t oder the pizza. >> Suddenly, the manager told me that we haven\'t ordered yet.   So I was shocked and rang Mum and she told me that she is going to order. >> I was shocked and gave my mom a call. She told me that she\'s going to order.   So the manger said to wait about fiftheen minutes. >> So the manager said that I wait for about 15 minutes.   I bought the pizza came home. >> I brought the pizza home.   It was really hard to ride bike with holding a pizza. OH NOOOOOOO! >> It was really hard to ride a bike while holding a pizza box. Oh no! We ate pizza and I think it was more scrumptious because I colleted. >> We ate the pizza and I think it was more scrumptious because I personally got it from the shop. It was a very unlucky day!! >> CORRECT OR: It\'s such an unlucky day.