PLACE CONCERNING FOND MEMORIS

2016-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Now that I'm getting older, I'd like to learn how to play the guitar to make my life richer and more easygoing. Sometimes I smile on my frature looks playing the guitar peacefully. As I retired from the Army, a few of decent jobs were offered to me, but I rejected the proposals because I preferred going abroad to accumulate my potential capabilitis for the second half of life. I stayed with my son who went to university in Vancouver, Canada. At the time, my wife was running her own business in China. All I had to do was to study international trade and English including regular workouts and household chores. The most rewarding experience was to talk with many youths from Korea, Japan, China, Canada, and so on. I liked analyzing what the difference among them was. The most fond places while living there for one and a half years were two churches. One was comparatively small, the other super-sized. I really enjoyed listening to English sermons every sunday. Whenever thinking of Vanco

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Whew^^ I think there are a lot of places where we have great memories! Thank you for doing your homework, Sir^^ Now that I\'m getting older, I\'d like to learn how to play the guitar to make my life richer and more easygoing. >>Now that I\'m getting older, I\'d like to learn how to play the guitar to make my life richer and more easy going. Sometimes I smile on my frature looks playing the guitar peacefully. >>Sometimes I smile at my looks while playing the guitar peacefully.As I retired from the Army, a few of decent jobs were offered to me, but I rejected the proposals because I preferred going abroad to accumulate my potential capabilitis for the second half of life. >>As I retired from the army, a few of decent jobs were offered to me, but I rejected the proposals because I preferred going abroad to accumulate my potential capabilities for the second half of my life. I stayed with my son who went to university in Vancouver, Canada. >>CORRECT! At the time, my wife was running her own business in China. >>CORRECT! All I had to do was to study international trade and English including regular workouts and household chores. >>CORRECT!  The most rewarding experience was to talk with many youths from Korea, Japan, China, Canada, and so on. >>CORRECT! I liked analyzing what the difference among them was. >>CORRECT!  The most fond places while living there for one and a half years were two churches. >> The fondest places while living there for one and a half years were two churches. One was comparatively small, the other super-sized. >>CORRECT! I really enjoyed listening to English sermons every sunday. >>I really enjoyed listening to English sermons every Sunday.  Whenever thinking of Vanco >>(I will be waiting for the continuation)

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