Places to avoid on a trip
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I haven\'t had much experience traveling to many other countries yet.
So I\'m not sure which country or where to avoid.
I don\'t feel like travelling to an unsanitary places.
Because I\'m worried about my health.
That\'s why I don\'t want to go there.
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I haven\'t had much experience traveling to many other countries yet.
>> Correct
So I\'m not sure which country or where to avoid.
So I\'m not sure which country or where to avoid.
>> So I\'m not sure which country or place to avoid.
I don\'t feel like travelling to an unsanitary places.
I don\'t feel like travelling to an unsanitary places.
>> I don\'t feel like travelling to unsanitary places.
Because I\'m worried about my health.
Because I\'m worried about my health.
>> It\'s because I\'m worried about my health.
That\'s why I don\'t want to go there.
That\'s why I don\'t want to go there.
>> Correct
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