Places with Contents
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Honestly, I\'ve never hanged out with friends for 7 years.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, I don\'t know much of places to hang out except \'metaverse\'.
>> Therefore, I don\'t know much about places to hang out except in \'metaverse\'.
However, I think movie theater and flee market are nice place to have fun.
>> However, I think the movie theater and the flee market are nice places to have fun.
These places have much contents, so probably It\'s good places to hang out.
>> These places have much contents, so it\'s probably good places to hang out.
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