Plan in Spain
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Hannah,
This is such a great plan. I\'m sure you\'ll have fun in Spain! ^^
-Teacher Ash
I searched some reviews of students who studied in Spain. >> I’ve looked into the experiences of people who studied in Spain
Also, I tried to make a connection with students who will go exchange student in Spain like me.
>> I tried to connect with students who will also go to Spain as an exchange student.
In Spain I want to visit Coastal de Sol in Malaga.
>> I want to visit Costa del Sol Malaga.
It\'s beautiful beach with mesmerizing view.
>> It’s a beautiful beach with a mesmerizing view.
In addition, I want to visit all cathedrals in Jaen.
>> In addition to that, I also want to visit all the cathedrals in Jaen.
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