plan of after work
학생이 쓴 원문
After work i am going to go to parents's house today.
Baby is sick so i don't want to go there.
It take 2 hours by car from here.
I am afraid that long distance traval makes my baby more tired and disturb to recover.
I really want to let her have enough time to take a rest this weekend but my husband want to go there because he has a round of golf tomorrow.
is he a good father?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Oh, you gave me a difficult question to answer, dear. (Hahaha)
Is it okay not to answer it?
As much as I want to, I just can\'t because I don\'t want to judge your husband.
However, if I were a father, I would rather want to stay home with my baby and take good care of her.
~Teacher Chloe
After work i am going to go to parents\'s house today.
>>After work, I supposed to go to my parents\' house. Baby is sick so i don\'t want to go there.
>>My baby is sick I don\'t want to go there. It take 2 hours by car from here.
>>It take two hours by car from here. (Spell out numbers from 1 to 10)I am afraid that long distance traval makes my baby more tired and disturb to recover.
>>I am afraid that the long travel would just make my baby even sicker. I really want to let her have enough time to take a rest this weekend but my husband want to go there because he has a round of golf tomorrow.
>>I really want her to take a rest at home this weekend but my husband wants to us to go there because he is going to play golf tomorrow.is he a good father?
>>Is he a good father?
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