plan of after work

2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

After work i am going to go to parents's house today. Baby is sick so i don't want to go there. It take 2 hours by car from here. I am afraid that long distance traval makes my baby more tired and disturb to recover. I really want to let her have enough time to take a rest this weekend but my husband want to go there because he has a round of golf tomorrow. is he a good father?

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Oh, you gave me a difficult question to answer, dear. (Hahaha) Is it okay not to answer it? As much as I want to, I just can\'t because I don\'t want to judge your husband. However, if I were a father, I would rather want to stay home with my baby and take good care of her. ~Teacher Chloe   After work i am going to go to parents\'s house today. >>After work, I supposed to go to my parents\' house. Baby is sick so i don\'t want to go there. >>My baby is sick I don\'t want to go there. It take 2 hours by car from here. >>It take two hours by car from here. (Spell out numbers from 1 to 10)I am afraid that long distance traval makes my baby more tired and disturb to recover. >>I am afraid that the long travel would just make my baby even sicker. I really want to let her have enough time to take a rest this weekend but my husband want to go there because he has a round of golf tomorrow. >>I really want her to take a rest at home this weekend but my husband wants to us to go there because he is going to play golf tomorrow.is he a good father? >>Is he a good father?

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