Plan to doing best

2011-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

I hope to compose in English everyday. But what was warse isn't enough to prepare my lessons. So I have an idea for this. That is write in English about subject matter of prepartion. So please understand to confuse my compose.

강사 첨삭

Hi beautiful Risbon! 

I am very happy because you're really trying your best in everything you do, and that will help you a lot to learn new things. I know that you are working on your full capacity and you are really eager to improve your studies. 

Thumbs up for that! Great job! 

It's me,

Teacher Joanna


I hope to compose in English everyday.

>>> I really like to have a composition everyday in English.
But what was warse isn't enough to prepare my lessons.

>>> But the sad part is, I don뭪 have enough time to prepare my lessons.
So I have an idea for this.

>>> I had an idea for it.
That is write in English about subject matter of prepartion.

>>> That is to write about the subject matter for preparation in English.
So please understand to confuse my compose.

>>> Please try to understand my composition.

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